a tear

you used to sing to me

every morning

you come to my room

smile and sing so beautiful

then one more morning you

werent there

no song

today i heard your song

the one youd singed to me

i sat there quitely

taking in the lycies

every cord every drum beat

the before i knew it

a sing tear came down

my face

i didnt wipe it away

i let go

the tear would soon be gone

just the way you did

 

Author's Note

yea thanks :I

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Sad but very Beautiful. thank you for sharing
Blessings Kindred poet


you used to sing to me

every morning

you come to my room

smile and sing so beautiful

[deadlysilence]

so sad but very good great job

[paparapapa]

Really sad and full of emotions. But I suggest rereading it since there are a lot misspellings. But still, this poem's a good one. good job. ;)

sad write, enjoyed that song

[raindroplove]

this is the song

[Truth_About_Rain]

Wow, this is a pretty cool poem! :D
I love those last two lines, the way you connected the whole poem together in a wonderful ending!

[Canicus]

this is a good poem. sad, not much but a little anger good write keep it up