she

she

A Poem by raindroplove

she
    she thinks she the queen of hearts
I
    I am the ruler of all cards
she
    she waits to get me at the end of the day
I
    I am her pray
she
    she thinks she can beat me
I
     I already won
she
    she has her army
I
   I am all alone
she
    she will find me
I
    I am ready
she
    she thinks she has her "man" on her hips
I
    I have him on my lips
she
   she haves he evil magic

    I have my thoughts
she
     she has blonde curls
I
    I have my long brown hair
she
    she thinks of only herself
I
     I have the powers of others
she
     she has eyes to change
I
      I have eyes to kill
she
        she has her silly vocie 
I
       I have my words
she
       she will die
I
     I being her killer

© 2011 raindroplove


Author's Note

raindroplove
to you bully's on my bus

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I liked it. Very creative. A few grammar errors, but it was well thought out

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow truly amazing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the ending. Awesome poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


right there! dont care about them you are much better than them !! really good write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was really great
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-Meja Malina

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Beautiful. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


she
she thinks she the queen of hearts
*She thinks she is the queen of hearts
she
she haves he evil magic
*She has her evil magic?
Intense! I feel this way about people a lot too. Very good piece. Good format, stable repetitiveness, good job, I liked it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aaahh bullies, I remember those annoying lil pests.

I really like the format of this piece. Certainly is refereshing seeing something different.

So simple yet so malign. This is how you use simplicity to it's fullest potential.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wonderful write. I remember that like it was last friday... oh wait, it WAS last friday. lol well great job. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


A witty way to flip those annoying pests off, I like it! Only a few spelling and grammatical errors but who am I to talk.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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