she

she
    she thinks she the queen of hearts
I
    I am the ruler of all cards
she
    she waits to get me at the end of the day
I
    I am her pray
she
    she thinks she can beat me
I
     I already won
she
    she has her army
I
   I am all alone
she
    she will find me
I
    I am ready
she
    she thinks she has her "man" on her hips
I
    I have him on my lips
she
   she haves he evil magic
I 
    I have my thoughts
she
     she has blonde curls
I
    I have my long brown hair
she
    she thinks of only herself
I
     I have the powers of others
she
     she has eyes to change
I
      I have eyes to kill
she
        she has her silly vocie 
I
       I have my words
she
       she will die
I
     I being her killer

Author's Note

to you bully's on my bus

Reviews

[Shayla Sayer]

wow i loved the whole "she
she thinks she has her "man" on her hips
I
I have him on my lips "

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Great write now to put those words/thoughts into action onlyno killing it's not ethical

[WynterPhoenix]

This is very powerful and strong. great write!

[Pollyanna]

Very forceful and direct . . . love it!

[Jibin]

Great and powerful write, it's different stuff.
i love this...

[Dragon]

This is a very creative poem. I like how you lay it out as the words dance off the screen. This is very entertaining. I love it! :)

[KAREN]

Excellent poem! Keep that head of yours held high! Bullies will always be around but don't let them get you down. You get some help from a teacher, your parents, someone. Just don't let them get you down. You're better than that!

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I really enjoyed the way you alternated each line with "she" or "I." The layout helped the flow of the poem. Very nice opposites also. I actually thought this was between a man and a woman when I started reading this, and then I realized it was two girls when I got to "long brown hair." This is an outstanding bullying poem that stands out for its fresh style and words. In the eighth line, "pray" should be "prey."

[Zoey]

It was creative and flowed; Ending was interesting.

[Roxi L]

Super powerful. I love the ending.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi~