she

she
    she thinks she the queen of hearts
I
    I am the ruler of all cards
she
    she waits to get me at the end of the day
I
    I am her pray
she
    she thinks she can beat me
I
     I already won
she
    she has her army
I
   I am all alone
she
    she will find me
I
    I am ready
she
    she thinks she has her "man" on her hips
I
    I have him on my lips
she
   she haves he evil magic
I 
    I have my thoughts
she
     she has blonde curls
I
    I have my long brown hair
she
    she thinks of only herself
I
     I have the powers of others
she
     she has eyes to change
I
      I have eyes to kill
she
        she has her silly vocie 
I
       I have my words
she
       she will die
I
     I being her killer

Author's Note

to you bully's on my bus

Reviews

[☯]

I loved this! The feisty and courageous poem you've wrote here is really inspiring! I liked the beat and the self confidence portrayed in it. An amazing write :)

[Cody McGeary]

Like others have said i like the format. The back and forth makes it very interesting and really sets the two characters apart. Very Nice.

[SheWhoWillNotBeNamed]

The layout is amazing.
I enjoyed this piece immensely!!!

[KrisK]

Putting it in the context of bullying, makes so much sense. I like the format "She" and "I"...powerful use of emphases

[hopelove]

i love it

[raindroplove]

thanks for the reviews

[The Cute 1]

nice

[Butterfly Ninja :3]

i like the format and very nice poem :)

[Kindled Gargoyle]

Bus bullies are the worst!!! D:

[The old me]

very powerful and good