she

she
    she thinks she the queen of hearts
I
    I am the ruler of all cards
she
    she waits to get me at the end of the day
I
    I am her pray
she
    she thinks she can beat me
I
     I already won
she
    she has her army
I
   I am all alone
she
    she will find me
I
    I am ready
she
    she thinks she has her "man" on her hips
I
    I have him on my lips
she
   she haves he evil magic
I 
    I have my thoughts
she
     she has blonde curls
I
    I have my long brown hair
she
    she thinks of only herself
I
     I have the powers of others
she
     she has eyes to change
I
      I have eyes to kill
she
        she has her silly vocie 
I
       I have my words
she
       she will die
I
     I being her killer

Author's Note

to you bully's on my bus

Reviews

[TC Dunn]

very strong and powerful!

[Krimson]

way to stand up (:

[just is]

This is really amazing, I like this write.
Wonderful flow of this as well.

[lostmymarbles487]

i like the she vs i idea. there are a few grammer errors. i know you've prob got this before but yes this poem is relatable and i can feel ur anger through the poem. good write

[Between the grey]

Oh this is so good, ever so wonderful. Love this write alot.

[No name]

very nice flow and I actually loved this poem.

[gothicchica]

i llllllllloooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeedddddddddd it look out her

[L. Catherine]

Nice layout and very powerful. I can definetely feel the anger coming from this poem, great job!

[Alaska]

I too like the layout of this poem. You did a good job portraying duel feelings. it sounded both pained and vicious.

[Mr.Krene]

I like the comparison between the two and spacing it out like that really defines the personality of each. Overall a good poem. Good job :)