ducktape

my ducktape can fix your heart
my ducktape can fix your broken dreams

my ducktape can keep your mouthshut
my ducktape can came make you stay still

my ducktape is sliver
mine is pink

Author's Note

yea i know its short

Reviews

[Spookers]

At first I thought it was going to be a cheesy love poem, but then You went and switched it. I liked it. Short and simple. Gets the point across. Thumbs up

[Kindled Gargoyle]

Very short and interesting...Love short interesting things!!! :D

[AndyJCash]

I've had to read this a couple of times to get my head around it (in a good way!) The first stanza made me think that maybe the poem wouldn't be nasty, then the second stanza changes the perception. I'm thinking maybe it's about the two sides of a relationship? Either way, love the structure, how the colours show the different people.

[raindroplove]

no i wasnt

[Just a Dream]

wow
were you high

[Matthew Kult]

Short sweet to the point

Matthew

[GlamGirl]

This is really cute! I like the different colors and how short it is. Short and sweet :)

[Kiari Sabon]

lol i like it

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my ducktape can keep your mouthshut

Oh How I loved this line, I wish I could do this to someone too. LOL
I really enjoyed this write and the colors used. Nicely written.