what i feel

i can't deny

what i feel inside

the pain

of that hug in the rain

i give up

i tierd of your game

you suck

i was the prinecess

you were the frog

i kissed you

and you your not so true

you never came around

i am lost in the crowed

she is so not beautiful

she your type

this is the last time i cry tears

for you

forget you

Author's Note

this is to by gbff i am tierded of your games stop playin with my heart....

Reviews

[Just a Dream]

its really good

[Butterfly Ninja :3]

very emotional love the last two lines ;)

[Kiari Sabon]

im srry for ur pain and it was good

[Kat]

Great poem!! It looks like you got all your emotions out by writing this! I don't have a guy best friend so i don't know what it feels like to get your heart played with but you showed me what it feels like so Great Job!!!!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

all save the final line is shall we say "acceptable" IMHO Why do some writers feel that they must use such words? The English language is chock full of words that would bring the level aof anger and/or disgust across to the reader You have done so in spades with this write the last line IMHO is uneeded no rating given because of the final line

[The Cute 1]

whoa lol i soooooo understand this

[quinfinn]

i like your version of "what i feel" (you see, i have one by the same title). it is gritty, angry, honest and down to brass tacks real! god, did i feel your anger and pain!
excellent write with a stellar ending. cool...

[~Lizzy♬]

My guy bff plays with my heart too hun! It's something you can't control, but just be guarded in your heart and know the real him inside your heart... I know you might say that you're tired of his games, but the real reason why guys do that is because they don't know what they want about themselves. Make sure you're just there for him when he's in need or something because finding a great guy best friend is hard to do. :/

~Lizzard~

[brenda]

guys are jerks its like this its in their blood or something i know one exception though hope he doesnt change but anyways you had typos but when you write with your feeling you dont really care what people think and ye fudge freaking him hes not worth your tears!!

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is a good poem.