by your side

read it

you can love

you can cry

you can die

i  will all ways be at your side

 

you can laugh

you can smile

you can run around for awhile

i  willall ways be by your side

 

you can yell

you can hit

you can pitch a fit

i'll all ways be by your side

 

you can leave

you can find someone new

you can move miles aways

i'll still be by your side............................

 

 

Author's Note

this is to all mother out there :) am not a monther but i want to be a take of my baby cuzin alot :)

Reviews

[Knoxxeh]

At first i thought you were talking about a boy and i got alittle creeped but then realized it was about mothers and i loved the poem great job

[Patches I'm not so new..]

This is what a real mother is one who is always looking out for and standing up for her childern thank God for such ladies

[J. Marc]

I am sure any Mom would love to read this poem! It is frank and very powerful yet. Very sweet indeed! By the way, fathers should appreciate this too.....! Why not!?

[fireblossom]

Your good heart is all over this poem. Reading it made me happy. Thank you.

[BlueberryKisses]

This is a nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. The only thing Im going to mention is in the second stanza, it should say 'i will always be by your side' instead you put 'i willall ways be by your side' :)

[Kindled Gargoyle]

A very sweet poem. :) I like the way it was writtem.

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

This is a beautiful motherhood poem. Mothers really are the most wonderful people in the world, even though they don't get a lot of credit. It's unique the way you rhymed the second and third lines together--I don't think I've ever seen that before. Instead of saying "I will all ways be at your side," I think you mean "I will always..."

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An adorable piece of writing, well peaced, great read

[brenda]

aaaaw:) this poemis so sweet i like it this could be a great poem for those mothers tht care about their children:)

[Dragon]

This reminds me of friends. They all argue sometimes but they make up soon or otherwise they know what they really want now. Great work! :)