the greatest love story

read it

something diffenrt 

about are love

something fresh and new 

like something from above 

lips cheery red 

i can't get you 

out of my head

you can be you 

ill be me 

one day i'll get on one knee 

and beg you please 

then your dad 

will give you away 

i say i do 

you will to 

we'll have our first kid

will name him after your dad 

he'll be wild

just like me

we'll get old 

sitting on the swing 

watching our grandkids sing

i'll go

and see my father above 

you wait the you'll come

we'll be forever 

and have the greatest love story ever 

 

Reviews

[SheWhoWillNotBeNamed]

put a smile on my face!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Ahhh such a delaration of love this is beautiful!

[compositionc]

That's so CUTE!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Very sweet!

[mrs.poet]

this peom just made my day :) Good Job!!

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Such a sweet love story! Just run it through spell & grammar check.

[Joiedevivre]

so sweet! Made me smile!

[Magdelena]

Simply elegant.. A great show of words.

Mags xx

[fireblossom]

I again ignore the spelling problems ;-)

Then I read a sweet poem. You have a poets heart rdl. Keep up the good work!

[Pollyanna]

Very sweet and simple! Don't forget to double check your grammar, punctuation and spelling.