11

read it eveyone forgets 11

i close my eyes

count to three

i open my eyes

count to four

start to run

count to five 

stop and set up camp

count to six

get some water

count to seven

think why am i running

count to eight

grab my gun

count to nine

put it to my head

count to ten

pull the tringer.....

 count to eleven

am not dead....

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple and magnificent, well done

[Joiedevivre]

unexpected end! reminds me of how we count to fall asleep and sometimes what we think before gets meshed up in our dreams.

[Lily Mae]

That's because 11 is considered in spirituality to be a sacred number...so 11 couldn't let it happen ;) xx

[Tasha]

This had very good imagery. I liked it. Awesome.

[Magdelena]

Deep... Like a story, time passing quick, images just as quick. Amazing

Mags xx

[HopelesslyDevoted]

amazing... truly amazing

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

was not your time............

[Alicia Hirshey]

wow. The image I got from this was mind blowing. It is a great poem.

[that weird guy]

wow..

[☯]

Short and spicy. Great job on it :)