11

read it eveyone forgets 11

i close my eyes

count to three

i open my eyes

count to four

start to run

count to five 

stop and set up camp

count to six

get some water

count to seven

think why am i running

count to eight

grab my gun

count to nine

put it to my head

count to ten

pull the tringer.....

 count to eleven

am not dead....

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

I have the same question as argentum.. Good poem though:) It was interesting

[argentum lumen]

I liked the format to this. One question in the last line is it supposed to be "am" or "I'm" Good job on this poem it kept me interested to the end.

[Fairytale]

Interesting poem. I like the counting.

[SilentScreaming]

I love it! It's really...intriguing. It kept me reading and I love how it is set out. You did a really good job on this poem!

[Cynthia]

OMG, you just keep me reading this! Its just amazing! I love it! Count to eleven, wow, you keep me thrilled. I love this poem really much, its how it keeps you from reading to the end, its cool, amazing!
Nice Written!

[KAREN]

This poem is very deep! Well done!

[Kat]

i like it :)

[brenda]

wow this is so suspenseful i really like the poem!!:)

[Bailey C. Writing]

This was very deep, pretty intense. I liked it a lot!

[Dragon]

Whoa! Cool stuff here. Dang, I think that every poem I read is amazing since I have no good talent in writing one. You must have a poetic brain or something. :)