sream

sream

A Poem by raindroplove
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smiling hurts

you said i faid my responsibilty

yet you fail your

 

am tierd of this

its goin over board

just one mistake

and you did it before

 

my heart cant take it no more

its killing me deep inside

you don't see it

i try to hide

 

i've cried out before

yet you didn't hear me

here i go again

please help me

© 2011 raindroplove


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Families are important, cause they're so important, they can hurt you easily, and they can support you easily. I hope you're dealing fine with your family, just talk to them more, then i think they'll understand. This poem is very honest and sad, there's a sad tine in your poem, and i love the poem, but I sincerely hope you're feeling fine :)
Great Job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


just to let u know this isnt about a guy its more of family....

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yeah....I like this poem...but guys are evil and manipulative...don't let a guy get to you...because they might hurt you over and over again. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Silent cries are the worst.. x

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 24, 2011
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