the day

love at first sight

the day i saw you

i knew you were mine

the day you made me laugh

i knew youd be my secert Valentine

the day you hugged me goodbye

 was the day i cryed

the day you called

i smiled

the day you came back

i finaly won you over

the day i told you i love you

you said you did to:)

Reviews

[Evan Kleve]

Lovely poem, I just feel that the line "I smiled" was a little off in the poem. Other than that, lovely poem.

[KAREN]

Sounds like love! This poem breathe the emotion love, well done!!