No Longer His

Um, a poem I wrote that most of you might think you understand but you probably don't unless you in my mind but what do I know?

He's angry with me

I can understand that

The look in his eyes

Made me feel trapped

Under his power

Under his possession

Not a sound to come out

Until the next session

I ran to my room

And slammed my door

Tripping over my bag

I fell to the floor

I looked under the bed

And grabbed my case

Knowing the dangers

I would have to face

Opening the container

I saw a note

Tears fell from my eyes

And sobs from my throat

Ignoring the paper

I grabbed my blade

Thuds came from my door

But I knew they would fade

Two cuts would be fine

If I cut deep

The pain would subside

And I would fall into sleep

That was my out

And it worked perfectly fine

My life was over

No need for my shrine

No longer would my

Life be out on the brim

No longer would I

Be forced to please him

 

 

Author's Note

um yeah I know it sucks and there might be some errors again I didn't take forever editing this. Aside from the damn ending.

Reviews

[Aditya Unni]

very different,nicely put.

[Sharkapillar]

i just have one question...why aren't you taking any Creative Writing classes?!?!?!?

[Shannon]

omg, i like it!!! this one's structure was great, the rhyming pattern was good, and the message was progected perfectly! Good job!! love ya ^_^