you say that

just a poem

you say that you love me,
you say that you dont want to hurt me,
yet you still do...
you say that you want to be with me,
yet you cant decide who you want,
and you never will be able to decide that......
you say that you cant stand to see me hurt,
so what do you look away or sit down?
you say i am your everything,
so what do you have nothing now?
you say you cant live with out me,
so are you dead?
when i say all of those things it comes from the heart
and i mean it!!!!!

because i really cant live with out you

Author's Note

just read it please

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

you say that you love me,
you say that you dont want to hurt me,
yet you still do...

I hear this all the time....

[O.J.]

i luv this one cuz of the way you play with words, and cuz of the sarcasm, ofc.
empty promises, we've all been there, now haven't we? 'tis all life....
hang on there.... and.. good write
OJ

[Sarah]

makes me sad...
bt happy cuz its so good.

i say wat i mean, i mean wat i say.

[Cassandra]

hmm.. how many times have I heard these words in this context ? I think we all have. They're some of the emptiest promises I think one can make during a time of break-up, and yet they really are said with truth and emotion usually at the time of sputtering.. they're meant to assuage the abrupt pain from that break. No, we don't want that person hurting, its just inevitable..

my favorite part was :

you say i am your everything,
so what do you have nothing now? -- love the sarcasm here
you say you cant live with out me,
so are you dead? -- and here. :)