Freedom

Me being myself

All i have is myself

nobody else

but myself

all i see in the star that shines so bright

is me.

I am the star in your eyes

i want to be the sun someday

even if it is a star

cuz im a star

Im myself nobody else

i am myself and nobody else

All i ever wanted to be was

me

Author's Note

try to except who i am

Reviews

[Aurora Lynn]

I totally agree with this whole message. Some jerks will try to make you be somebody that you're not, and tell you that you're stupid. I just try to ignore them :)

As I've said before, if you take away the chat speak it might be a little easier to read.

Other than that, this was a really great poem! I especially love the line 'I am the star in your eyes/i want to be the sun someday' I'm pretty sure that's true for all aspiring writers.

[GlamGirl]

I like the concept. :) You could have used less text speech to create a more professional and emotional feel. Other than that, great job!

[Does it matter]

I would avoid "text message" spelling in poetry, but I suppose that's who you are. Haha. I can identify with your message

[Shiningwolf]

This is exactly how I feel :)