Broken Wings

It's a short poem (song, really) about a dying girl.

 

Broken wings

[Chorus]

The girl with the broken wings

Stands up high and sings

Smiling for the last moments

The moments all leading to this one

The girl with the broken wings

Stands up high and sings

[Verse 1]

Nine months to live

Nine months to forgive

Broken hearted, broken wings

Can’t wait to see what tomorrow brings

Every minute is a minute lost

This is what not living cost

[Verse 2]

Scarred, forgotten, hated

Is the life that you created –?

Where’d it all go wrong?

You shoulda stayed strong

So give up your game

Because you’re the one to blame

[Chorus]

The girl with the broken wings

Stands up high and sings

Smiling for the last moments

The moments all leading to this one

The girl with the broken wings

Stands up high and sings

[Verse 3]

You’re trying

You’re trying

You’re lying

You’re lying

You’re dying

You’re dying

[Chorus]

The girl with the broken wings

Stands up high and sings

Smiling for the last moments

The moments all leading to this one

The girl with the broken wings

Stands up high and sings

Reviews

[BelowABridge]

this is really awesome. the rhythm is good for a song. well done.

[Skye Manson]

I hope this is a song because that's what it looks like to me. Anyway, if it is i hope that it makes it way to the radio someday. Well Done!

[visions of doom]

deeply dark and very moving . i hope the pain subsides and the healing process takes effect very soon .