Poetically Yours

Poetically yours

 

Bend against my curves

Like a treble clef’s curl,

Slip through lyrical spaces

And caved in lines of

My silent voice

Speaking fluently with

straightforward adjectives

Stalking verbs and

harassing the nouns

with pronoun eagerness

forming structure

with jot down verses

of emotions .

 

In me lies the focus

of your subject, so…..

Read me like the front page

headline of your poetic news

printed in black and white

 poetic notes

Conversing codes of secrecy

Encrypted for poetic purposes

that only you can decipher by

reaching inside my soul

where poetic frequencies

echoes off measured breathing

deep within my inkwell

Humming rhythms

becoming the backbone of my melodies.

 

You are the

atoms and elements that

creates poetry’s pitch of sound

blended with imagery

creating emotional reaction

affective via syllables accented

through the voice of your pen,

the purest form of art scribed

For In you

I’ve found solace

through poetry...

forever and always,

 

Poetically yours

 

~Rain~

Reviews

[ANTO]

I think instead of tremble you meant treble (G clef) here Rain C but the imagery of the treble clef personified like one side of the might cello says it all. Sensuality abounds from the off without jumping lanes - it stays firmly in the good taste and it tastes good (metaphorically speaking).
"Poetic frequencies ...becoming the backbone of my melodies" - is gracious and lyrical.

Signing off like a love letter is the cherry on this cupcake - thanks Rain

[RainC]

....lovely, lovely review ANTO! You know, when I posted this a year ago on another site, the reviewer mentioned the same mistake, and I didn't think to come to this site and correct it. Great observation, thanks for loaning me your eyes.... ;)

[Lavender Soya]

Hello Rain,

Great work, it's a captivating hodgepodge of different subjects. The elements clearly agreed with each other. Kudos!

Best,
lavender soya

[RainC]

Hello lavender soya, thanks for knocking on my door with a basket full of treats. This piece does have a few different things goin' on eh? lol.... Glad you enjoyed! Making a mental note to drop by your home soon. Thankya! :)

[Lavender Soya]

Verily, verily.. a few different things stringed together in perfect harmony. Different, but desirable elements. My pleasure! ^^,

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love the way you use the elements of grammar and semantics in this poem...to show love for another and love for the genre.

beautiful poem.
jacob

[RainC]

...your review is warm and generous, jacob! :) Thank you for the visit, sorry for the late response...Xo

[A. Amos]

Simply splendid, enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing

[RainC]

So pleased you enjoyed, Amos! I haven't been on this site in over a year. Will try to catch up on reading writes by you and a few others I follow. Thanks! :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend

[Antoñyo]

Poetry in motion. To me, this flows like the deepness of a stream, cool and quiet.
Thanks for sharing.

[RainC]

Thank you so much Antonyo! Very kind of you to leave a comment!
Poetic Love~

[Antoñyo]

I was amazed no one had from 50. This is a piece certainly worthy so the pleasure is mine.
Thanks again