No More Of U.

No More Of U.

A Screenplay by Raihan Ithnin

Written by: Raihan Ithnin

 

 

Int/2 rooms Apt./Day

 

 

It was quite dark except for a dim light that comes from a small table lamp shining on a bottle of Southern Comfort,a glass of liquor an x tray and the little-little things on the table.Smoke comes from someone smoking the cigarettes.

 

 

As Mike down glasses & glasses of liquor;his mind starts to roam on the empty space & start to have flashback memories of him & Kristina happily as a couple & the moment she left him.

 

 

CUT TO
Ext/Beach/Evening

 

 

Mike & Kristina sat on a beach in a romantic ways enjoying the sunset.

 

 

MIKE:
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I just hope that this night will never end.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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What do u meant ?

 

 

MIKE:
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Well people change & the truth is;I don’t want to lose u..

 

 

KRISTINA:
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Mikey;U know how much I love u.Why don’t we enjoy every moment we are together,k.

 

 

CUT TO

 

 

Ext/Jam studio/Evening

 

 

Mike with the look of dejection as Kristina was facing him..

 

 

KRISTINA:
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I’m sorry Mikey.I just can’t hold on to someone whose life doesn’t go anywhere.

 

 

CUT TO 1ST SCENE

 

 

Int/2 rooms Apt/Day

 

 

Daze & confuse he just can’t figure out the reason why.Afterall Kristina has been very supportive of him.Suddenly the phone ring and he just stare at it till the ringing stop.Then his mobile phone on the table start to ring & Rick name was on the screen.As he pick it up and answer in a dying voice;

 

 

MIKE:
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Hello

 

 

RICK:
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Mike where are u,are u coming to the studio or not?

 

 

MIKE:
#
No I’m not feeling good today.

 

 

RICK:
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Come on Mike,we only left a couple of song to make it right before our recording.This is what we’ve been looking for.A recording deal.Don’t turn back on us.Well I know what u went thru.Well it’s hard to find a friend that cry together with u but let me tell u that we are like a family.We’ve been thru a lot together especially getting where we want to be,I’m not going to cry with u but I make sure u get out of this f*****g s**t and I will personally drag u to the studio if u can’t make it.

 

 

MIKE:
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Ok ok I’ll be there.

 

 

RICK:
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K then see u there.

 

 

CUT TO

 

 

Int/Studio/Day

 

 

At the studio;everything was bad because Mike can’t deliver the song well.His voice are totally out.His bandmate and everyone on the studio are piss off with him.

 

 

CUT TO

 

 

Outdoor/Outside Studio/Day

 

 

Rick put his arm around Mike.

 

 

RICK:
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I still have faith in u.Hope to see u next week k.

 

 

Mike look at him and walk away.

 

 

CUT TO

 

 

Ext/Street/Day

 

 

Standing across the street overlooking the office building of Kristina hoping to have a glance of her when he saw her walking with a guy in an intimate manners.Feeling so down & dejected he went home

 

 

CUT TO

 

 

Indoor/2Rooms Apt/Day

 

 

Day 2

 

 

Same scenario as scene 1.After downing glasses of Southern Comfort & roaming his mind on the empty space,he decided on something that can make him move on.He pick up his phone & call his boss.

 

 

MIKE:
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Hello Mr Fred,Mike here

 

 

BOSS:
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Yes Mike

 

 

MIKE:
#
I need a few more days to settle my things.

 

 

BOSS:
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Will u have enough money since u are daily paid.

 

 

MIKE:
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Don’t worry about that sir.

 

 

BOSS:
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Well I’m more worried about u.

 

 

MIKE:
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I’m ok.

 

 

BOSS:
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Well get back after You’ve done.I still need u.

 

 

MIKE:
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Thanks Boss.

 

 

CUT TO

 

 

Ext/Streets/Day

 

 

Standing across the street opposite of Kristina office building.He waited for her after work with the camera this time.As he saw Kristina and the same guy flirting with each other;he started snapping photos of them.

 

 

CUT TO

 

 

Indoor/2 Rooms Apt/Night

 

 

The house are a little bit bright now with an extra lights other than the table lamp.As he down glasses of his Southern Comfort,smoking his cigarette & flipping thru the photos of Kristina & the guy that he took earlier in the day when his mobile phone starts to ring and he pick it up heavily.

 

 

MIKE:
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Hello.

 

 

RICK:
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Hei ! Mickey.How are U lately ?

 

 

MIKE:
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Ok

 

 

RICK:
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That means u are good.So I’ll be seeing u tomorrow.

 

 

MIKE:
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For what ?

 

 

RICK:
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Oh ! for goodness sake.Its jamming tomorrow & u forget about it.

 

 

MIKE:
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I (pause)

 

 

RICK:
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Well don’t say that u are not coming.We have no time for that.If not we have to find a new vocals which we rather not.So u can be selfish or think us as a band.K,see u tomorrow.Chiau.

 

 

AS he flips thru the photos of Kristina & the guy again,he starts to realize & talk to himself.

 

 

MIKE:
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Why do I have to kill myself this way for someone that don’t love me anymore.

 

 

Someone that are happy with someone else.Well if u love somebody,sometimes u have to let him or her go.I’ll let u go Kristina.I have to move on.He stand up,pick his guitar on the corner & settle down on the sofa strumming a few notes, humming & finally smiling.

 

 

MIKE:
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Atlast u gave me some inspiration.

 

 

As he start to compose a song and sing;”No more of U.”

 

 

FADE OUT

 

 

Int/Studio/Day

 

 

As he enter the Studio,everyone was looking at him with mixed feeling.

 

 

RICK:
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Hei! Mickey;Glad u come.I know I can put my trust on u.

 

 

MIKE:
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Yeah,By the way can u guys do me a favor.

 

 

Everyone was looking at him as he start to show them a few notes to play.

 

 

RICK:
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So this is your new song.

 

 

MIKE:
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Yeah ! wrote it last night.

 

 

RICK:
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Hei guys;We finally get our old Mickey back.

 

 

DRUMMER:
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Then lets start Rockarolla.

 

 

The Band play the song & it was a satisfying one.

 

 

RICK:
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U know Mickey.This will be our bonus track.

 

 

THE BAND:
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Yeah ! Rockarolla.

 

 

CUT TO

 

 

Int/Car/Day

 

 

While Kristina was driving her car & listening to the Radio.She was entertain by the song that just end when;

 

 

RADIO:
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After a long silence.Finally Rockarolla are back with their 1st Album.No More Of U that u just heard are from their bonus track.So come down to the Substation for their album release on the 20th Dec.Rockarolla U will get as the band will also play U their bonus track.So see u there.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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Hmmm,not bad.Finally u made it.

 

 

CUT TO

 

 

Int/Restaurant/Night

 

 

While Kristina having dinner with her new guy.

 

 

ROBBERTH:
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Kristina.I have to tell u something.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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What’s that ?

 

 

ROBBERTH:
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I’ll be going back to the State next week.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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What !

 

 

ROBBERTH:
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Sorry for not telling u earlier & thanks for all the special moment.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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Just like that.

 

 

ROBBERTH:
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I don’t mean to hurt u & forgive me if I did.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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Yeah u did.

 

 

ROBBERTH:
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The truth is;I’m married with 2 kids.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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Oh! That’s really hurt.

 

 

Robberth calling the waiter & pay the bills.

 

 

ROBBERTH:
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Well u can still come to the State sometimes.

 

 

KRISTINA:
#
For what ?

 

 

ROBBERTH:
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Visit me & I will show u around.

 

 

KRISTINA;
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Oh! F**k yourself Robbberth.

 

 

ROBBERTH:
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Oh! Don’t say that.We’re still friends.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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Well just leave me alone k.

 

 

ROBBERTH:
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Well then,see u at work tomorrow.

 

 

Robberth stand up & walked away,leaving Kristina alone crying in silence feeling cheated.

 

 

FADE TO

 

 

Int/Bedroom/Night(flashback)

 

 

In the bedroom as Kristina & Robberth lie down in the bed.Robberth looking at her.

 

 

ROBBERTH:
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U are such a beauty.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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U are great.(smiling)

 

 

ROBBERTH:
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U mean in bed.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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No.In the bathroom.

 

 

And they start laughing.

 

 

CUT TO

 

 

Int/Restaurant/Night

 

 

Sitting alone at the table.Kristina starts to order a bottle of wine & start to drink as the night pass.

 

 

CUT TO

 

 

Int/Backstage/Evening

 

 

Mike and the Band are busy preparing for their Album release.

 

 

RICK:
#
How do u feel Mickey ?Finally we are here.

 

 

MIKE:
#
It’s just the beginning Rick.

 

 

RICK:
#
Yeah but we’ve been thru a long journey & the rest of the journey,won’t be impossible.

 

 

MIKE:
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Yeah thanks Rick for believing in me.

 

 

RICK:
#
We’re supposed to thank u for not being selfish.

 

 

MIKE:
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Thanks for getting me out of the s**t

 

 

Mike turning to his bandmate.

 

 

MIKE:
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Thanks guy for everything.

 

 

DRUMMER:
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Lets start Rockarolla.

 

 

RICK:
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Well Mickey,we have some tuning to do.See u on stage.

 

 

MIKE:
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Yeah & I’ll give u my very best.

 

 

Rick turn to Mike & smile.Walk out with the rest of the guys.

 

 

Rick comes back after a few minutes & smile.

 

 

RICK:
#
Mikey.I have a surprise for u.

 

 

Kristina walks in & smile.

 

 

MIKE:
#
What a surprise.

 

 

RICK:
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K Mickey.I’ll left u guys alone.

 

 

Rick walked away.

 

 

KRISTINA:
#
Finally u made it Mike.I’m happy for u.

 

 

MIKE:
#
Thanks.So how are u ?

 

 

KRISTINA:
#
Fine & thanks for asking.

 

 

MIKE:
#
U come alone.

 

 

KRISTINA:
#
Yeah.

 

 

MIKE:
#
So where is your boyfriend ?

 

 

KRISTINA:
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What do u mean ?

 

 

MIKE:
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I mean the ang moh guy that u spent time with.

 

 

KRISTINA;
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What ?

 

 

Mike take out the photos of Kristina & Robberth out from his wallet & show it to her.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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Oh! that (saying softly)b*****d.

 

 

MIKE:
#
What !

 

 

KRISTINA:
#
Oh no,I mean he went back to State.

 

 

MIKE:
#
I see & why are u still here.

 

 

KRISTINA:
#
What do u mean ?

 

 

MIKE:
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Yeah why are u not following him?

 

 

KRISTINA:
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That b*****d what for ? & don’t mention about him k.

 

 

MIKE:
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K then.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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Mike do u miss me? I mean I miss u.

 

 

MIKE:
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Oh stop it Kristina.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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Why ?

 

 

MIKE:
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U don’t know what I went thru.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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We can start afresh.

 

 

MIKE:
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We are not going to start anything together.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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I know I left u & I’m sorry.I realize now that u are important to me.

 

 

MIKE:
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I’ve been dying every moment since u left.I don’t mind losing u as a girlfriend but u are not only a girlfriend to me but my best friend too.I felt betrayed,losing a best friend like u.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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But I will make up to u if u give me another chance.

 

 

MIKE:
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No,there won’t be.I have enough of that dying moments.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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Don’t say that Mike.(starts to cry )

 

 

MIKE:
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Well I’ve to be ready on stage by now.Got to go.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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(Shouting & crying)Mike please don’t leave me like that.

 

 

MIKE:
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I’m sorry Kristina.U are the only one I love but not anymore.

 

 

KRISTINA:
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(Wailing & shouting)No Mike don’t do that.

 

 

Mike walk off to the stage.
Ext/Stage/Evening

 

 

ANNOUNCER:May we present u the Band with the no 1 hit singles(The crowd starts to scream)No More Of U…….Rockarolla.

 

 

And the Band plays.The crowd scream while Kristina walk & look at the stage.Make eye contact with Mike & walk away from the crowd,wiping her tears

© 2008 Raihan Ithnin


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