Redemption

Redemption

A Poem by Aiza
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another pantoum poem

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Still living in fear of being hurt
Never thought I'd feel this way
Reaching for a hand worth holding
Trusting that you will keep me safe
Never thought I'd feel this way
The memories haunt my dreams
Trusting that you will keep me safe
Scared to death of repetition
The memories haunt my dreams
Don't let yourself be shamed
Scared to death of repetition
I will always look to you
Don't let yourself be shamed
I will always look to you
Still living in fear of being hurt
Reaching for a hand worth holding

© 2010 Aiza


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its lovely Aiza,the title suits so well,,,you so beautifully build a groove for your reader to seep into,,a girl's tender feelings,her sense of insecurity and her longing to brace a hand worth holding,,,

Posted 14 Years Ago



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