step out of your mind

step out of your mind

A Poem by Aiza
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originally written in January 2008

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Step out of your mind, just for a while

And lie down beside me

Let’s talk with the worries in our pockets

Erase old first impressions

Living for now and not those yesterdays

Tomorrow will come at its own pace

Until then, spend this moonlight with me

 

Hearts burst with beatings

Show your loves beginnings

Just be alive with me

Believe

 

I’ll give you my reasons, if you’re willing to wait

My thoughts race so quickly, but it isn’t my fault

 

Such a beautiful being

I won’t lose you for anything

And I’m ready to admit it

Whenever they are ready, day or night

 

My words will scream all their own

Each word has a meaning and a message

And every mind will bust with sudden understanding

They’ll wish they could take it all back now

 

Again I will ask for your company

Leave our doubts on window sills

Let winds blow them far away

 

Torment creates our freedom

Painfully, but surely

One day we’ll make this

 

Eyes full and tearful

Wishes and dreams are breaking

Still more and more beginning

 

Times of trial and losses

Bring hope and understanding

I’m right here beside you

 

Don’t give up on me

I am all yours

 

Turn down the sun

Burn out the stars

Reach for the moon and take hold

It will give in if you try

 

Don’t let go

A fight needs a battle

The battle needs its hero

Victory is ours

 

Take my hand

And jump

Trust me, trust this

 

Falling through memories

Screaming out loud

Scared of our fate

But if you believe, just believe

 

One moment have faith

Those memories become the present

Shared not lost

 

Feelings that are indescribable

Your love has become nearly requisite

Almost essential and completely necessary

 

So continue to take this fall with me

© 2008 Aiza


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very beautiful written and emotional. My only criticism (though this may not be liked) is that love is a very used subject. Yes it holds a lot of potential to talk about, but trying other subjects is more captivating in my opinion

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a really good one, Im in love with one of the most amazing people in the world and the entire time i was reading this all i could think of was her... thats what love poems are supposed to do make you think of the ones you love... kudos on this, it definately be a good one...

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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