Sister your that special someone

for a sister who isnt rlly blood related but shes like a sister to me... first time writing a poem so its probably not as good as hers

i cant be weird in front of everyone 

so your that special someone

in front of whom i can laugh cry and glee

i am able to share everything with you 

and i hope u are able to do so too

everytime spent together with you was worthwhile 

even if it was, at imes, only for a shortwhile 

if you are in trouble ill walk a mile 

to wipe your tears and see your smile 

im sorry im not always there when u call my name 

i hate it ! its such a shame 

so ill pray to allah to keep you safe 

in times when u think you are unsafe 

dont worry i will always remember you 

the same way you keep rememberance of me too 

i know this poem is nothing compared to yours 

its really my first time so its still underscores 

if only time could rewind 

we wouldnt need facebook to find 

the time we spent together 

in merri weather

Reviews

[Yu Nick (unique)]

This is WONDERFUL peace of writing!

[Valeigh Starr]

This is lovely! I just chanced upon it on the writing homepage, but it fits a few of my closest friendships wonderfully.

[Rosa Enriquets]

thank you Valeigh. im really glad you liked it and that it fitted your closest friends! it for one of my great friends too ^^