Lost

Lost

A Poem by Rachel

I'm lost
I can't seem to find myself. 
Everywhere seems to be a wrong turn.
Bad places surround me.
I must get free.
No one seems trustworthy.
I need help.
Guide me to the right path.
But no one can because I am far gone, 
and to the point of no return.
How'd it get so bad?
You were supposed to watch me.
I guess you never cared.
Well now I'm lost 
and I am never coming back

© 2010 Rachel


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Thank you.. I am glad i was able to move you.. yeah this was a dark time for me =

Posted 14 Years Ago


This poem moved me. Such feeling and emotion such sadness. Short and to the point. I want to comment on the subject matter but it hit so close to home I dare not to. Needless to say I share you pain...Awesome write..

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 4, 2010
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Rachel
Rachel

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