Being A Loser

I'm a loser around people,

I'm a loser without a voice.

I'm a loser without decision,

I'm a loser of my own choice.

I'm not loved by many,

And my talents are long gone.

I'm a substitute friend and lover,

And I've been average since I was born.

I lost my only chance,

To keep the dog I got.

I tend to hurt my friends,

I tend to care a lot.

I look like a boy,

And I only write when I'm upset.
I'm selfish and judgmental,

And I do things that I regret.

I'm not the smartest girl,
I don't know what to say and when.
I hurt my parents twice,
And I'm likely to do it again.

I'm a loser in love,

I'm a loser that cries.
I'm a loser who admits it,

And even otherwise. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I saw your picture. You are a pretty girl. We are hardest on ourselves. We gain wisdom when we accept who we are and learn to live life without fear or regret. I like the flow of thoughts and I could feel the internal struggle. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Radhika]

Thank you for everything that you said. It's funny how strangers from across the world can help us more than the person closest to us sometimes.

[Chirag Kumar]

NIce poem radhika. This poem relates to every person who criticises oneself in the face of defeat. Keep writing more :D

[W. C. Forrest]

We tend to be too critical of ourselves. You poem has flare and you write like a winner.

[Saddam]

I look like a boy,
And I only write when I'm upset.
I'm selfish and judgmental,
And I do things that I regret.

I'm not the smartest girl,
I don't know what to say and when.
I hurt my parents twice,
And I'm likely to do it again.

I am most pleased read this. Simply great. Awesome piece of art dear.

[Radhika]

Thanks a lot. Means so much to me :)

[A. Amos]

If you can write like this, then for me you're not loser...

[Radhika]

Thank you. It means a lot.

[jade~green]

No one is a loser, just different in there own way. You will find your way.

[Radhika]

I guess you're right. Thank you :)

[Avinash]

That makes you very real, as you can see where things are going wrong.
Someday you may get the courage and light to resurrect yourself. Keep trying.

[Radhika]

Thank you for stopping by :) Means a lot