The Music of Life

[Written on 7th June 2010]

Music of Life

 

Sounds like raindrops

Sounds like teardrops

 

Sounds like a cry

Sounds like a shrill

 

Sounds like a symphony

Sounds like a melody

 

But I do feel  harmony

PEACE is what I experience

 

I am engulfed in thy music

The Music of Life

 

                                                          Radha

Reviews

[Abdul Aziz]

Beautiful! I like poems that are short and to the point, and I don't know if they can be any more direct than this!
You make the reader hear all the sweet sounds of nature with your melodic words. The use of couplets to highlight two similar sounds, and different imagery is very well done!
Beautiful write!

[Daydreamer54]

Nice poem! i liked it! :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

right on, write on. Nice work.

[deeps]

Simply stunning write, I like this write.
I love the flow and message of this.