Flux

Flux

A Poem by terriblerosey
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Love you ma...

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When you’re wrong
You’re way out of control
You bleed out your soul
When you’re wrong
You’re way out of control
Start playing the role

Your life was in shambles
That’s all, you knew how to build
Your demons, would whisper instruction
Don’t know, your left from your right

When you’re shown
You’re way out of control
You cry out your soul
When you shine
You’re way out of control
And all the heads roll

You are such a misfit
The pride, it blinds your true self
Don’t judge, remember we love you
And all, your devils do too

© 2009 terriblerosey


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Love in spite of everything.

...Don't judge, remember we love you

This piece has a soothing quality about it, despite the somber tone. Nicely done!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on August 7, 2009