Hello And Nice To Meet You...

Title is part of poem.

I really like your shirt
Should I just go away now
Before my heart gets hurt

Hello, do you remember
How we used to talk
I said hi and you said hey
And up away you’d walk

Hello and how’s the weather
Down in slums LA
We get bad reception
Hello is all I say

Hello and welcome home now
To your wife and kids
I thought they knew about me
Am I who she forbids?

Author's Note

I love critique.

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[theunknownchick]

You love critique? I love your poem =D Good JOB