Life is

a choka

Life can really bite
It can rip your heart in two

Can quickly kill you

Life can really bite

So be careful what you do

Or it might get you

Author's Note

for my project

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

“its only castle burning,find someone who’s turning and you will come around”
Neil Young.

[JENY]

Very pessimistic view of life…
But well written….
There is great beauty in brevity…..

[Nickole Alhoni Ra'Nae]

deep!!!!!!

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Life indeed is a b***h if you don't get at it...it will get at you..well said..

[Daydreamer54]

Well i interpret this as, whatever u might do in ur past, it'll come back up to haunt you. That wat i get ou if it. it;s a nice way for someone to get their own opinion out of this. ^^

[Friks]

This bites! It is like a gunshot, BANG! And it's over.. life bit you. Fantastic *indian accent* Mind blasting!

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... oh wow ... this is brilliant!!! ... :) ...

[xxKrysti.Kittyxx]

rawrrrr!!! =D

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Short but expressive, strong and dark. I agree with everyhting you express in this poem, well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Life may bite but some folks do bite back. A excellent short poem. To the point and strong.
Coyote