My attempt at an epic

epic: an extensive, serious poem that tells the story about a heroic figure.

To save the world

One person at a time

Is a dream

Of mine

 

To be the hero and help

To people who had my past

I wonder how I would feel

And how long it would last

 

Being a hero

Is one tough job

You might save a million people

But on the inside, sob.

 

The hero is always

Prepared to fight

To stand up

For what is roght

 

They will risk

Their life

To save one

Life yours and mine

 

I often have had the dream

That I was the heroine

But to save the world

Would it be a sin?

Author's Note

its not exactly an epic but it kind of is.... right?

Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Very good poem, I really enjoy it.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

hmmm...that is indeed courageous and kind of you to think of saving the world as a whole...i for one have a hard time saving myself haha...;)...i enjoyed reading your write...it was good but it did appear weak to me at certain points....it could have been more sharper with more use of words...

[*Evelen*]

Wow this is a very nice write here. I liked this poem bunches. Well done:)

[Zane Mathias]

Really Great write XxVOLLEYBALL GIRLxX i really enjoyed it!!!! Keep up the great work!!! B.P.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

I really like this, this is a one epic (see what I did here? :D) poem! I think you did a good job at writing an epic poem!.. :)

[Anita]

Interesting idea. I think you are a hero everytime you smile at someone. It is kindness, free to give and worth a fortune to receive. =)

[Senseless whatever]

Good poem. A few typos and some flow issues. You start one tempo then change, or maybe it was the way I read it. Good write.

[Prateeksha Khot]

epic or not, i liked this poem ;)

[zombiikillah666]

i like this.
good poem. (:

[GrownUpTime]

"For what is roght"
i think u ment right.
awsome poem!