Better Days Have Finally Come!!!!!!!

message me if you want more

imma feelin better

finally

this is how

my feelings should be

 

not too intense

not too strong

not too weak

or lasting too long

 

im happier now

thank you all

to reach you i know it's

one phonecall

 

i love my friends

so very much

they've helped me so much

they should get a rush

 

thank you all

sleep tight

love you all

good night

Reviews

[Ian]

This poem got me all interested im like how can something like this catch my attention

[MissWordSmith]

it was nice but the rhyming was a little weak.

they've helped me so much

they should get a rush

not so good. but good enough.

[ProseAspiration]

The only thing i felt was a little outta place was the third stanza, the first part was good, but the use of 'much' twice, i felt was a little to repetitive for me cus then it seemed like you were short on words when you got to the last line of the stanza "they should all get a rush".
Otherwise i did enjoy this poem, if a little more for the message =)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. It is good to find a sort of peace in the life. I'm glad you are content. A excellent poem of thankfulness.
Coyote