Razor Hunt

message me if you want more

my parents are pissed

my cell phone is gone

my iPod is taken

thats so f***in wrong

 

just cuz they found

a destroyed razor

with the intent to

"hurt myself" later

 

a cut for a cut

is what they said

they cut off my phone service

i'll cut off their heads

 

f**** that s***

imma do what i want

now im out

on a razor hunt

Reviews

[Areya Valena]

Oh. We Are much alike in this category. This is a very good poem, and i can relate. we get so angry when people take our posessions that meaan so much away, and it pisses me off when parents punish instead of trying to figure out the problem. I wanted to say i have a few razors for u to borrow, but thats not good lol. I'll join u in yours sumday.

[Sean Eddingfield]

Your parents love you... when you cut it hurts them too... would you rather they didn't care? Very good poem... I really enjoyed your anger.

[Eloise]

yeah, i know what that's like, i liked the poem, it had a lot of deapth, very nice work. i'm sorry to hear that you're depressed though.

[Global Norskie]

wring=wrong? (in the beginning).

that's pretty dark, but I have to admit, I liked it. Particularly the part about a cut for a cut. haha.

Keep up the great work :)

[Saturn's Lover]

Whoa. The end of the poem made me laugh, i think it was just your attitude about it. So, why did you cut in the first place though? I'm just wondering...