Tears left uncried

your ugly rachel

your fat rachel

your stupid rachel

you fat @$$ b****

 

i believe that

all they say

so just

get out of my way

 

i run home

and go to my room

and what follows me

is a cloud of doom

 

i sit at the edge of my bed, razor in hand

tears come to my eyes

but i stop myself

for i dont want to cry

 

so later ill look

at my inside

and now i cry

these tears left uncried

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

i run home
and go to my room
and what follows me
is a cloud of doom

The damage that words inflict is far more powerful than any of us realize. Insecurity is at the root of most belittling words. Those people abusing you are trying to look better in others' eyes. When really, it just shows what is on the inside of them. Look for the jewels that come from this horrific experience. You are a far more compassionate person because you know what it is like to hurt. Your poetic words are priceless. Thanks for sharing, my dear.

[Stacy]

This was unique to me. I liked how you were showing others your feelings that are held deep within, but know that beauty is only skin deep and our true selves are what we shall show to the world.

;o)

[Snuffles]

Awww, if this is true im sorry and glad that you can express yourself.
If not, its very good that it seems so realistic.
Good job.

[Wildecat]

I really hate it when people are cruel to someone else. It's not what is on the outside it's what's on the inside that really matters. So tell them to bite you. I"ll bet your a prertty gril.

[Mysty Rayn]

I wish i could say I don't know how this feels, but I do. When I was younger I was heavy and far less attractive. I was made fun of everyday and everyday I came home and cried. It was never easy. I realized (and I'm still learning) that it's about what is on the inside. People do notice that. Maybe not now, maybe not tomorrow, but one day. If you can lay your head down at night knowing you were a good person or at least the best you could be, it makes a big difference. Good luck.

[chiisu]

you are not ugley your are not fat you are beautiful you got that to hell what people say...you got that me becky and every one else will always be by your side no matter what =^^=

[Alaina]

wow,, if thats true, im soo sorry, but i know what your going through, if it werent for the few close friends i have and writing life would be unbearable. its a really deep poem,, but its very good, i just want you to remember something theres always someone out there who loves you for you,, so when you get picked on bullied just remember, your loved. i love all your amazing work,, you seem like a great person. take care, and thanx for sharing!

[A. Kress]

Awe...is this true?