Sometimes

sometimes an enemy becomes a teammate

sometimes people back-stab each other

sometimes people like 2 b alone

 

why?

 

sometimes you regret what you do to yourself

sometimes you regret not doing something

sometimes people will tease and torture each other

 

why

 

this is how God made us

not perfect as you see

but rejoice in the fact

he hand crafted you and me

Reviews

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

This poem is very true.
I love the repetition of sometimes.
It really emphasizes and unifies the piece.
I love the ryhme in the last 4 lines.
Very strong ending to a very strong writing.
Nice flow of words.
Great structure.
Good rythme.
Wonderfully written.
Excellent work.
Great Job!
^_^