My Wish

My Wish

A Poem by r

my wish

for the time here is this

problem to pass

over me really fast

 

so i can leave

and i can see

my family

who loves me

 

i feel so

secluded and alone

day and night

putting up an internal fight

 

to break these chains

will cause many pains

it will tough

the going will get rough

 

i will do this

i will win it

i will break this hold

and never start again ever

 

i will do it

© 2008 r


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This is great.


I love this piece,
breaking an addiction, to get back to the people you love.

It just shows how love can save you, physically (i'm guessing it's not about being addicted to shoes)
and emotionally.
I absolutley adore this. Great job.

XxStaySweet,
Rina

Posted 16 Years Ago



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