Am I?

you asked me my name

and what do i do?

i answer with 2 words

f*** you

 

you try to talk to me

and what do you say

i tell you to

go the h*** away

 

sometimes im a loner

other times im not

but im definately a fighter

ill fight with all i got

 

when im in a good mood

people always get me mad

i regret what i do after that

but when i dont do it, im sad

 

am i truely ugly

am i really fat

or are you mouthin off

and tellin me that

 

i have

begun to believe

i am those names

that you call me

Reviews

[Luther]

hello there. thanks for the review on my poem, much appreciated. i thought i would return the favour and have a read of your work. i actually really enjoyed it! this is not the sort of style i would normally choose to read if i am totally honest, however i very much enjoyed this piece, and must say you may have taught me to be a bit more open minded. thank you and well done xxx

[inhale]

i really liked this piece it was a little choppy in parts but i really like the message. ive felt like this many times myself.

my favorite verse is this:
sometimes im a loner

other times im not

but im definately a fighter

ill fight with all i got


I find the last two lines to be especially good. They bring a im strong and i wont give up feel to the poem. good write keep writing.