Insecure?

now the light's are out

the sun sets on another day

yet there is not much

to describe it that i can say

 

painful, somewhat

lonely, sure

happy, kind of

just a little insecure

 

sure life's good

and my family is tight

but my future is blurry

i wish it would come into plain sight

 

where i'm going

i don't really know

so i'll just keep going

untill an end is shown

 

Reviews

[Jennifer]

This is really good. I feel the same way, and i just dont know how to get past it.

[Annalisa]

bueno! ^^

[Annalisa]

This was nice. The tittle definitely fits and the insecurity get across to the reader. I have one suggestion though, you might want to play with the line "to say about today that i can say", it's a bit redundant and interrupts the flow of the poem.