Restless nights

I'm breaking
I can't be fixed
I'm missing 
and I bet I won't be missed 

still shaking 
from what I fear 
I can't let you in so dont come near

I guess your right 
I'm way to thin
and I'm fighting a battle that I'll never win 

I have to many flaws 
I don't even know where to start
from my fucked up mind 
to my fucked up heart

so what's the point to continue to fight...? 
when my restless days turn into restless nights 

this life hasn't been fair 
I can finally tell
that nobody cares and it hurts like hell

Reviews

[Bohrium Guy]

I see raw emotions with a touch of truth in visual. Well done in expression, sad but a very awesome piece.

Thanks for sharing this write and keep on writing on!!!!

~Rob~

[rachel]

Thank you very much.

[A hare off]

a sad and lonely poetic piece of writing. I can feel the pain as I read this. We are all flawed and often those flaws are our beauty.