Crashing

about a car accident that i was in with my mom, bf an his little brother, now im dealing with bad back problems

Last kiss last breath

all eyes closed

car rushing down

smacking agasnt

All four screamingin pain

one down with head hurting

one with tremendous back pain

one on the left cradling his head

holding her breath

gathering strength

to calm down her love

the mom freaking out

sirens blaring

strechers taking him away

her hand out strecth t

wondering if she will see him

little boy shaking

the mom holding the boy closed

telling calm down son

in police car now

driving to hospital her eyes layed on him

tears streaming down her face

holding his hand

until she can see him again

in her head

is the memory

of him screaming in pain

she cant stop thinking of that

rushes through her head

taunting wanting

just to be their

ocmforthing his side

until he feels well again

now she is home

in her bed

tossing an turning

crying in pain

whispering

'please help god''

Reviews

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"tears streaming down her face
holding his hand
until she can see him again
in her head
is the memory
of him screaming in pain"
!!Nice a gorgeous emotional piece!!!
I Love It!!!
~great poem!!!

_wow_

:)

[Rach]

its okay its not your fault at all but yeah it was really bad.. but the police said an the doc said the more force it was.. we would not be here right now

[Ashley.M.E]

=/ Rach I am sorry about that had happened... So many peoples' lives get messed up by car crashes. I am grateful you are still hear to talk to by the way this reads.. I would have never imagined it that bad. Poor Russ... He will be ok... You should really give your back a rest >.< No more soccor D: