I could be

Stanza 1:

You were always there in the background

I never did try to figure you out

In my world of flashing lights

You were merely a hint of black and white

Until the time

You flashed the most beautiful smile

It took a while to realize

That you are what I needed in my life

Chorus:

I know I’m not the most beautiful girl

I know I can’t make your head swirl

But I know this much is true

I could be the one who gives all her love to you

Stanza 2:

Ever since that time I saw you

I had always tried to impress you

Wear all the prettiest clothes

Wonder if today you’ll begin to know

That I’m the one

The girl who makes you come undone

Might take a while to realize

That I’m the girl you could need in your life

(Chorus)

 

Bridge:

And I wait for the day

When you’d call out my name

Coz that’s all I really need

And boy I’ll take care of your heart

Accept you for every part

Coz you are the boy of my dreams

Reviews

[jennifer little]

great poem

[AbsentElements]

The story in this is great, especially since so many people feel this way. No one should ever put themselves down though, nor should they try to be something else to impress someone else, and even I will admit I am guilty of that. Your piece is amazing.

[Chris Lotus]

You may not think of yourself to be the "most beautiful girl" but you disprove that through the words you use. This is very heart-felt and is bound to lighten a heart. Excellent job!

[JenLyn]

It's sweet, a decent write, keep it up! :)

[PaperHearts]

This was such a sweet song! I liked how honest and open this song felt, and how the realism of it made me as the reader be able to relate to it a whole lot more. I thought that your song was structured really well, and that the bridge at the end was a perfect way to kind of tie up all the loose emotions together. Nice write! :)
~PaperHearts

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem. I like the movement and the flow of the words. Love should be good music and the best moments of a life.. Last lines complete a very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Ruth]

Interesting lyrics sweety, I can hear a sombre acoustic to this lol
Beautifully done!
xx

[Poetic Beauty]

These are good lyrics. The bridge feels a younger in the wording but it works well with what you already have written. The song's emotions are there and are ones that many can feel and understand.