No Tomorrow

This is a song I wrote just recently. Here's the link for the audio.:) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_VYVX4V9_XM

1st Stanza:
You can't fight fire with fire
They'll just throw you a bigger flame
And water and ice
Will freeze you just the same
You'll never get sparks
Without a hint of chemistry
You can't light a fire that easy
The only thing you can do
Is let go and let it be

Chorus:
So dear
I'm letting you go
It's time to lie on the low
To go with the flow
And accept that
You and I
Could have no tomorrow

2nd Stanza:
Thought you were my knight in shining armor
But you proved to be no man of steel
Turned into vapor
When I showed you how I feel
I can't tell you to feel
The same way for me
You can't force emotions that easy
The only thing you can do
Is let go and let it be

Bridge:
We could've been perfect for each other
You could've been my perfect man
But you weren't man enough
You weren't quite grown up
To know how you really felt
About me

Reviews

[Chris Lotus]

I really liked this piece upon reading it. Then I heard the audio and fell in love with your voice. Like I felt like flying over and saving you from that heartbreaker.

[tigerclaw]

Aww. I am still growing as a man and understanding the female race is a task. You got me hook with this.

[Jasmarine]

Sorry, but men are stupid. That is all I have to say about them. People enter your life for certain reasons. You are meant to learn a lesson for some specific reason. Always remember that. Yes it's hard but do remember that :)

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Interesting words of a song..Good luck with getting it out there..Sunflower

[Tate Morgan]

interesting

[Rick Puetter]

Dear rachielle,

A very nice piece. I especially liked the first stanza. Profound wisdom.

Greatly enjoyed.

Best regards,

Rick

[Daniel Gardner]

Nice work. It sounds like it will go well with music.

[PaperHearts]

Great lyrics! I liked how simple and direct your lyrics were, yet how complex and heartwrenching the underlying emotions of it were. The second verse really resonated with me, and I particularly liked the last two lines 'The only thing you can do/Is let go and let it be'. A very honest, relatable write. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

[Amy Bumpas]

Sometimes we do think we met our knight and shining
armour, but turned out to be more like a jester LOL!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is very good words for music. A outstanding poem. I like the movement of the words and the ending. A wise person knows when to run.
Coyote