Waiting For You

Another song.

Verse:

I did all that I could

To make you notice me

I was there more than I should

But you still couldn’t see

How I love every bit of your smile

And I’m mesmerized

When I look into your eyes

 

Chorus:

I wish you would just look

Right in front of you

‘Coz I’ve been standing here

Waiting for the time when you’d

See this girl waiting for you all along

 

Verse:

You’re talking about her

And all her perfections

Wanting to get to know her

But you never really knew me

How I love every bit of your smile

And I’m mesmerized

When I look into your eyes

 

Bridge:

I’m in front of you again

And you tease me and laugh

Not knowing

How these little things

Keep me going

Not knowing

This girl you’ve known for years

Had always been dreaming

That you’d

 

…Just look

Right in front of you

And really see what she’s going through

 

Coz I’ve been standing here

Waiting for the time when you’d

See me

And how I’m waiting for you all along.

Reviews

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

This is your forte! Song lyrics.
Reading through I pictured Taylor Swift's 'You belong with me', not because you obviously like her, but because of the presented images in the lines.

This is good and I say you put music to it.
Keep writing Taylor---I mean Rach lol

Lex

[Amy Bumpas]

This is good...and sometimes people can't see what is right
in front of them, and this goes for adults too...sometimes
we look for answers, but they are there, we just don't pay
attention to them. Good write!

[Libby McKeown]

Good luck getting a blind man to see. This poem embraces one of those universal questions: why her, and not me? I think this would make for an excellent song, with some bittersweet instrumentals, with a little anger worked in! Great work!

[Chris Lotus]

I can relate to this very much. Still have this feeling sometimes nowadays. If you recorded this by any chance. Id like to hear it.

[deeps]

This is so wonderful and ever so beuatiful.
I enjoyed this.

[Soul Magic✯]

this is beautifully written. i wish i could hear you sing this one... i bet it sounds wonderful. thanks for sharing