Sapphire Dreams

This one I wrote for a group. I hope you guys like it.:)

Saphir, you may be
A mere blue mist in my sea
Of rainbow-tinted dreams;
But I believe you are more than what you seem.

I walk with you
Towards the light
And lo and behold
I encounter quite a sight.

Never shall I forget you
Love, for you have made my nights
A tad more meaningful,
A bit more bright.

In the midst of slumber,
You wake my heart;
Hence, tonight until forever,
Your soul and mine shan't ever part.

Our inherent memories, dear,
Will never begin to cease.
The morrow may come, but my sleep, Saphir,
Only you can appease.

Author's Note

Just so you know, Saphir is French for sapphire. Also, just a bit of scientific info about the second stanza- on rare occasions, blue sapphires turn a different color (violet) when exposed to artificial light.

Reviews

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

Wonderful! This poem is an expression of luminary astonishment, such as a jeweler to his unique sapphire---same with a lover to his 'collection' perhaps?

If you haven't read my 'Dear Sapphire', this poem tackles the same theme and I'd love to know your comments on it,as we both delve the same path of thought. Wonderful write as always. I do wish you well, Rach!

-Lex :)

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a beautiful sense of darkness and light, sleeping and wakefulness, and the colors of life. Wonderfully rich like a vibrant tapestry.

[Amy Bumpas]

Thanks for the authors note:). There was something fairy taleish
about this..delicate, pure, and such strong words. I believe this
is my favorite of yours so far:).

[AbsentElements]

Very interesting information behind it. The vocabulary is very creative. Very well written.

[Soul Magic✯]

wow this is beautifully written. i like the description of the piece. your is amazing as always... stay hot :)

[Shalini Dinesh]

the poem was nice to read and different in deed, certain words added beauty to the poem.. over all a good piece of writing.