Fearless

There's a hollow inside
Unseen by most
This contradicting side
Will leave you lost.

Inside the spectrum
Is black and white
A fiery tantrum
Of endless Kryptonite.

But she can't be broken
Not just yet
Even when dreams are barren
Courage she will beget.

Even when the world's ordeals and dashed hopes call,
They would not push this woman to fall.

Reviews

[MusicJunkie66]

Excellent flow, I loved it!!

[AbsentElements]

"Inside the spectrum, Is black and white, A fiery Tantrum, of endless kryptonite."

Definetly my favorite part of the poem. I very much enjoyed the way your poem flowed together. It is a veyr powerful write. Nice job.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I don't understand why you did not break the last two sentences down into four lines for the final quatrain. But...I love the piece...like the superman allusion...good stuff!

[An owl on the moon]

There is a powerful sense of hope here, even in the midst of such opposition and emptiness. So well done in form and flow with a magnificent message!

[Manda]

awww i love this! the flow was nice and grammar too! i could really feel the emotion! well done!

[shayne]

The strength that's in this piece had been express real well. Great job!

Even when the world's ordeals and dashed hopes call,
They would not push this woman to fall.

- the ending is beautiful