Preface

I sat on a hill.

 I watched my world crash down.

 My world. 

 My life. 

 My family.

 Gone.

Author's Note

i know it is very short and my grammar has gone to hell so ignore that just tell me what you think of it

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE x 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000

Please?

[rachylou]

awwwwwww sweet and EPIC

[Dearantlers]

This is great' short but to the point and beautiful in its own special way that only you can capture.

[Rose of Gondor]

Are you EVER going to write more????? Please???? *puppy dog eyes*

[.quan.011.]

Short but sweet. I can't wait to read more.

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

With a preface as short as this one, i can only foresee a story of a girl whose world is submerged in darkness. I think.... um.... you should...mmm.... just go all guns blazing. Best of Luck!

[Freeminded]

WoW- I love it!! I feel so sorry for the person in this- its absoluteky brilliant!! This is going to be such a good book- I have a mystical feeling...dodooododooo

[~Dragon X]

It's amazing what few words can do. :') Consider putting "I watched my world crash down" on it's own line? Other than that, Great! Keep it up. :3

[Rose of Gondor]

:( Sad. But this is a very moving chapter. Now I wanna read more!!!! :)