To the side

Push me to the side,

'Cause I won't mind

Forget about,

What we planned out.

You chose them 

Over me

Well just look and see

I'll go on alone 

Till a friend finds 

Me

Author's Note

i know its not amazing but feelings of betrayal are hard to word

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

Kinda the same way for me, for a while. I was just there. People stuck with me, until something better comes along. That's how I felt, at least. But now I've got a new friend, and we stick together!!! :D

PS I know this is my second comment on this particular poem...but I LIKE IT SOO MUCH!

[rachylou]

friends dont always turn out like you thought they would. at least I can count on your EPIC poems

[Dearantlers]

That was beautiful! I absolutely loved it! You just have such a gift at writing poems. How's that book coming along?

[~Dragon X]

Aww sad :(
Heh, hard to word? You make it sound perfect. :)

[Freeminded]

There was a wonderful sense of feeling in this poem, the words all slotted in together beautifully. My favourite lines are "Till a friend finds Me". Wonderful- absolutely spiffing :)

[Laura E. Aranda]

this is the BEST one I have read by you thus far! keep writing!

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

So sad. :/

[Rose of Gondor]

:( awww....who'd you get betrayed by? beautifully sad poem. I think I'm depressed now....

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Captured feelings of betrayal so succintly and perfectly..a great poem xD