Dragon, dragon
A Poem by
rae52
Dragon dragon
with your fiery breath
your leathery wings
your scaly chest
Dragon dragon
you smell of death
you voice it stings
you giant pest
Dragon dragon
Fly now, begone
Bother not
Town city village
Listen to our song
Hear us
Head us
Fear us
Fly away now
Don't come back
Another day
© 2011 rae52
Reviews
poor dragon :(
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
It's great but *sniff* I dun wanna go! XD
Posted 12 Years Ago
It's great but *sniff* I dun wanna go! XD
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
oh such a wonderful write, don't come back again, love it
Posted 12 Years Ago
oh such a wonderful write, don't come back again, love it
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
"giant pest" XD I LOVE how you use "Don't come back/another day" It's from the rainy day song right (forgot the name) It kind of makes you think of another world *dreamy*
~Jasmine Thousand~
Posted 13 Years Ago
"giant pest" XD I LOVE how you use "Don't come back/another day" It's from the rainy day song right (forgot the name) It kind of makes you think of another world *dreamy*
~Jasmine Thousand~
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I LOVED it! I love everything about dragons, and well, this was amazing! I loved the rhyme, the flow, just everything about it! Perfect thing for your book! Can't wait to read it, and I'll soon be accepting read requests, so send me a few more!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I LOVED it! I love everything about dragons, and well, this was amazing! I loved the rhyme, the flow, just everything about it! Perfect thing for your book! Can't wait to read it, and I'll soon be accepting read requests, so send me a few more!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is a really good poem!! I could ( like Blue Fantasy :P) see the dragon flying away in fear...and a big army of weird witches speaking to it...random.... Well done!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is a really good poem!! I could ( like Blue Fantasy :P) see the dragon flying away in fear...and a big army of weird witches speaking to it...random.... Well done!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Felt like I could see the dragon with your words. Great write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Felt like I could see the dragon with your words. Great write!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love dragons. They'r'e like, my favorite fantasy creatures besides the phoenix
Posted 13 Years Ago
I love dragons. They'r'e like, my favorite fantasy creatures besides the phoenix
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Hehe...Fiery breath ;)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Hehe...Fiery breath ;)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Terrific again :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Terrific again :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on October 11, 2011
Last Updated on October 11, 2011
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