Can you

Can you

A Poem by rae52

can you jump 
i can jump 
right over the moon

can you fiddle 
hey diddle diddle 
i can fiddle too

can you laugh
i can laugh 
i make a hullaballoo

can you run 
i can run
i ran away with a spoon

the cow can jump
the cat can fiddle
the little dog can laugh
and the dish can run

in one little in
a very merry inn it was to

© 2011 rae52


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i wonder what this is based on hmmmmmmmmm

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like the way your poems are so short and precise. it makes them easy to read

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

your writes are so much fun and adorable, like this alot

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such an awesome poem! And I love the way it's based on the nursery rhyme, the cow jumped over the moon! I loved that nursery rhyme!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fun poem!! I love the way you based it on a nursery rhythme :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds fun! Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So cute! Reminds me of when I was six-years old and I dreamed about jumping over the moon.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahaha, I really like this :) Well Done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is awesome...brings a smile to my face :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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