Time goes by

Rabbits hop

Cars stop

Cows graze

Fires blaze

Birds fly

Time 

Goes

By

Author's Note

bit like words rhyme

Reviews

[rachylou]

CUTE

[Akshat♥]

its kind of sweet and cute poem:)
rhyme goes well..time always goes by
life always move on no matter what..
thanks for sharing it with me:)

[flippyblue]

this is awesome!! it's so short, simple, and cute, yet holds a lot of meaning. I can just see the images play in my head. This poem reminds me of summer :) Great work!

[T4int3dInn0c3nc3]

Cute :) and not tometion its really easy to write a comment on thisss. i loved this really short poem that, by the way, i am looking at when i should be getting ready for school in an hour :/ lol keep writingg!

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[Megan]

you have a really great way of capturing small things and moments, thoughts that no one else might catch and I love that :) Great write, it may be short but his a lot to say..thanks for posting!

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Yep, that is sometimes how time goes by! Dancing Fish-Very cute rhyme too!

Crickets chirp
grasshoppers jump
poetry grows
like moss on a stump!

Very cool.

[Chris]

Definitely unique to boredom's ink.

Chuckling here,
Chris

[Dearantlers]

I LOVED it! I love how you rhymed it, and just the random words that you used. It's perfect!!! Thanks for the rr.

[Rose of Gondor]

Cute and random. :) Love it!!!