Swing
A Poem by
rae52
Swing
Swing high
Swing up to the sky
© 2011 rae52
Author's Note
random lol
Reviews
short and sweet as cake I LOVE CAKE
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Ahaha, cute :3
Posted 13 Years Ago
Ahaha, cute :3
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
aw haha this makes me wish I was swinging on a swing in the park :) kinda reminds me of when I was really little, playing on the playground at school..loved reading this! thanks for posting!
Posted 13 Years Ago
aw haha this makes me wish I was swinging on a swing in the park :) kinda reminds me of when I was really little, playing on the playground at school..loved reading this! thanks for posting!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Fun! I love to swing. Thanks for sharing! :))
Posted 13 Years Ago
Fun! I love to swing. Thanks for sharing! :))
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Fun fun!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Fun fun!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
You've a fair sense of the 'ridiculous'
Chris
Posted 13 Years Ago
You've a fair sense of the 'ridiculous'
Chris
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
So short, and yet way good! It has a really good message, but you used eight words, and three of them are the same, so really six words! WOW!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
So short, and yet way good! It has a really good message, but you used eight words, and three of them are the same, so really six words! WOW!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow thats epic!! That is one of my faveourite poems!! Well done!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow thats epic!! That is one of my faveourite poems!! Well done!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wonderful joyous read :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wonderful joyous read :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Hahahaha. That's why I love swings. I get to "swing up to the sky"!!!! WHEEEEE!!!! Lovely little poem. :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Hahahaha. That's why I love swings. I get to "swing up to the sky"!!!! WHEEEEE!!!! Lovely little poem. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on September 18, 2011
Last Updated on September 18, 2011
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