Swing

Swing

A Poem by rae52

Swing 
Swing high
Swing up to the sky

© 2011 rae52


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rae52
random lol

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short and sweet as cake I LOVE CAKE

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ahaha, cute :3

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aw haha this makes me wish I was swinging on a swing in the park :) kinda reminds me of when I was really little, playing on the playground at school..loved reading this! thanks for posting!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fun! I love to swing. Thanks for sharing! :))

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fun fun!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've a fair sense of the 'ridiculous'

Chris

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So short, and yet way good! It has a really good message, but you used eight words, and three of them are the same, so really six words! WOW!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow thats epic!! That is one of my faveourite poems!! Well done!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful joyous read :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hahahaha. That's why I love swings. I get to "swing up to the sky"!!!! WHEEEEE!!!! Lovely little poem. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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