Builders and the Wolf

my twist on the story of the three little pigs

three builders met on a road one night

They said hello,how do you do

And talked of other stuff

I build with straw

I use wood

I use my trusty bricks

Mine are the best 

No mine are 

NO mine are the best i insist

Oh Mr Wolf are you there?

test our houses please

See which is the strongest

They shall win for you are a better judge than we

He huffed and puffed 

and the straw house fell down

He picked up the man and licked his lips 

And in a trice the man was gone

So he went to the second house

And puffed with all his might

It worked again

And the man was gone

SO he went to the brick house

Expecting easy victory

But he blew till he could blow no more

And with out a huff or a puff left in him

He said

Young master you win

And the wolf died upon that spot

the man was free

And that was the end of it all

Author's Note

randomly came up with this
will sort mistakes out later please don't bother about them

Reviews

[rachylou]

Piggys

[Chris]

You left off "Amoral"...

Chris

[LunarSong]

Really good, I love the ending And that was the end of it all, really creative way of saying the end.

[Dearantlers]

Wow, I love this idea. To have a poem that's kinda about the three little pigs! Great job, and I loved it!!! Thanks for the rr~

[Freeminded]

Love the idea!! Its imaginative, the words fit well into the poem, there is a rhythm- definetely a better story to tell kids!! Well done!! :)

[Megan]

Haha this is soooooo much better than the original story!!! I love how you turned it into a poem..I think I'm going to tell me kids this version instead of the other :) It's so creative!! Brilliant write! thanks for posting.

[Rose of Gondor]

Hahahahaha! LOVE this retelling! Sort of funny, too...GREAT JOB!!! ^.^

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I really like the offbeat nature of this poem...excellent :)